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14 November 2011 @ 09:32 pm
On Becky, Storytelling and Simplicity  
There’s a lot of wank going around fandom about how SPN 7x08 was a representation of the show’s attitude toward fandom, about how consent issues were exploited or, worse, ignored, and, most notably, how the hell Becky was able to hogtie Sam and drag him all the way to that cabin in the woods with her skinny little muscles. Seriously, did her friend get her a strength potion as well?

So my two cents on this starts from the fandom line and goes in a different direction. Proceed if you dare.



A lot of people feel like Becky is a substitute for the fandom. In Season 5 she was overenthusiastic, goofy, but nonetheless kind of loveable. When she arrived in Season 7 we barely recognized her, because she’d gone from someone we were somewhat proud (and somewhat embarrassed) to be identified with, to someone we didn’t like at all, someone who was manhandling and abusing our Sam and forcing him to do things against his will. Is this how the writers see us? we wondered. From the slightly teasing appreciation of Season 5, the fandom is now akin to a rapist, demanding we get our way because we have no life outside of our unreasonable love for the characters?

No way, said others. Becky isn’t an avatar for the fandom, she’s an avatar for the showrunners and writers themselves. They’re the ones who are lugging Sam and Dean this way and that, trying to force them into a box that they don’t naturally belong in. Eliminating rivals for their affection and looking down on those who would call them on their abusive behavior or, in their eyes, have the temerity to dictate what should happen to this show that the writers have created from the word go, the show that’s always been theirs and no one else’s, no matter how many fans it has!

Which is it? Who knows. What’s clear is that Sam is representative of the show as a whole. In that he’s too big to get dragged into a cabin in the woods without a serious suspension of disbelief. You gotta get him to go of his own volition, or things will just get messy.

Now, I was talking to my husband the other day about the Matrix trilogy. There was a simplicity to the storyline in the first movie, I said, that was not duplicated in the subsequent two. An ability to encapsulate the plot in a single sentence, to take all the diverse parts of it and tie them directly to the main point, so that they feel like natural limbs of the discourse instead of like embellishments.

“The human reality is in fact a Matrix created by robot overlords, but there exists one man who can free humanity.”

Everything else – red pills and blue pills, kung fu and lots of guns, oracles and phone calls – fed into that Story of the One. Not so in the sequels, when nonsense about programs and Mantowhatevers and Architects and all kinds of complications intervene in an effort to make the plot more layered but instead just make it more difficult to follow.

I would argue that all good storytelling needs to be like that first Matrix movie: layers and dimensions all feed into that one main line. Everything is the Story of the One.

That’s how Supernatural was during its first five years. Details notwithstanding, one thing that’s undeniable is that the whole series was always moving toward that one, defined endpoint:

“Sam and Dean’s love for each other averts the apocalypse.”

Everything that happened worked toward that goal. And the major plot points were simple and directly tied to it.

The search for Dad led to the hunt for the demon. Which intersected with Sam’s awakening powers in “All Hell Breaks Loose” and led to Dean’s deal and the opening of the Devil’s Gate. Which led to demons gathering strength and Dean’s death, which led to his resurrection, the reappearance of angels and, contemporaneously, Sam’s corruption. All of which brought Lucifer to Earth and brought on the final storyline: Dean and Sam are the vessels; now, are they able to overcome the trials and fights and misunderstandings and trust each other enough to win in the final fight?

Five seasons, in one paragraph. Simple, straight lines all being drawn inward toward a single endpoint. Each on-ramp was heading to the same highway in the end

Simplicity. “Two human brothers love each other so much that they protect the earth.”

Season six had a tough act to follow in that it had to start from a beginning instead of working toward an ending. To some extent, though, I would argue that Castiel’s corruption was the endpoint. (Yeah, that’s right… the whole point of Season 6 was to kill Castiel.) But even so, there were too many strands of plot, too many lines that veered off course or faded away. Sam’s soullessness, Dean’s family life, the re-emergence of the Campbells. The Alphas. The Mother (of all McGuffins). Too much was going on that never added up neatly. It felt like beginnings in search of an ending, and nothing about it was simple enough to sum up in a sentence.

Now we have season seven, and the theme, we’re told, is a return to the boys working together against a Big Bad, like the old days. Only, even the old days had a purpose, an end point. And again, we have threads that I don’t see how they can be woven. In fact, some of them are running against each other’s grain.

Dean’s guilty about Amy. But he’s also hardened. But he also doesn’t trust anyone. But he’s also “the old Dean” again. But he’s also losing his identity because he doesn’t need to take care of Sam anymore. But he does, because Sam is crazy.

But Sam’s not crazy. Sam’s feeling good. Sam’s a grown man and doesn’t need Dean anymore. Except Sam’s wall is still down and he’s still seeing Offscreen Pellegrino. Except he is mad at Dean for lying to him. Except he gets it. Except he doesn’t.

Meanwhile, God is dead. And Heaven isn’t involved. But Crowley still is. And the Leviathans are the big bad. Except they’re not. And by the way, Frank and Garth are brand new characters we should love. And there’s a CIA director involved. And Bobby and Jody are getting together, maybe. And Bobby’s past is coming back. And we may still someday see Castiel.

What’s the endpoint? Where’s the simplicity? Where’s the elevator pitch?

It’s as though they decided to throw everyone’s ideas in a basket and try to do them one by one. I feel like I need to stand to the side like Tim Gunn and suggest some editing might be in order. People are complex, but story arcs are simple. If they’re not, you’re doing something wrong. You can’t have on-ramps that don’t land on the same highway.

And to pull this all in to Becky again: if you’re working with the Sam you’ve got, you’re gonna have no problem taking him out to that cabin in the woods. Once you try to warp him and hog-tie him, that’s when you have to do a lot of heavy lifting. Becky’s what’s wrong with this show right now, and once she lets go and lets the man tell his own stories, she’s gonna be a lot more likeable.

EDIT: A bonus piece of meta from a discussion with harper47: So should the show have just ended at Season 5? I don't think so. I think that the idea of the unexpected post-Apocalypse world opens up lots of opportunities and there are still compelling stories left to tell... if you can let your characters tell them. And yeah, this is going to have to do with Castiel.

Because Castiel is the potential for the show after Season 5. He's the unexpected element that worked better than anyone thought he would, he's the life and heart that nobody thought would survive. It's destiny that the apocalypse would happen; it's destiny that SPN would always boil down to just Sam and Dean. But the show subverted destiny. Knowingly. And for it to try and stuff the character that is the embodiment of SPN's unexpected appeal and longevity -- well, it sort of puts the showrunners in Raphael's shoes, doesn't it? No, I don't care what the show has evolved into. We must go back to the prescribed destiny decided long ago.

It's just a shame they can't see that.

Thanks harper47 for the insight <3
 
 
 
seraph_lostseraph_lost on November 15th, 2011 02:49 am (UTC)
I have nothing unflaily enough to say except I love what you just did.

I will try to come back later with something resembling sense.
harper47harper47 on November 15th, 2011 03:06 am (UTC)
Smish. I did nothing but tweet a little, yours is the fabulously thinky brain. And I agree with you that Cas is/was the potential post Season 5. There was so much they could have done with Team Free Will. And LOL, you sort of called Sera Raphael and I love you for that. Great meta!
twisting_vine_x: Castiel - I'll Just Wait Heretwisting_vine_x on November 15th, 2011 05:45 am (UTC)
Because Castiel is the potential for the show after Season 5. He's the unexpected element that worked better than anyone thought he would, he's the life and heart that nobody thought would survive. It's destiny that the apocalypse would happen; it's destiny that SPN would always boil down to just Sam and Dean. But the show subverted destiny. Knowingly. And for it to try and stuff the character that is the embodiment of SPN's unexpected appeal and longevity -- well, it sort of puts the showrunners in Raphael's shoes, doesn't it? No, I don't care what the show has evolved into. We must go back to the prescribed destiny decided long ago.

It's just a shame they can't see that.


Legitimately started getting all teary. Thank you for putting this so wonderfully.
zatnikatelzatnikatel on November 15th, 2011 03:15 am (UTC)
He's the unexpected element that worked better than anyone thought he would, he's the life and heart that nobody thought would survive.

Yep. And I dunno, but I honestly feel that what the show did to Cas kinda pissed all over the themes of brotherhood, redemption and forgiveness that have been its bedrock. And for nothing. Misha didn't get to be the bad guy, so really, what was the point? At this rate they could have had Cas go back to Heaven.

I still hope the fact it was left open means Cas will get that proper redemption, but I'm not holding my breath, especially since Misha said he hasn't been contacted. In the meantime, I can choose not to watch… and the reviews I've been reading lead me to conclude that I'm not missing much, though I'm very happy for anyone who's still enjoying the show. ;-)

Edited at 2011-11-15 03:16 am (UTC)
Melaniemelalucci on November 16th, 2011 04:32 am (UTC)
I'm with you, although I'm still watching.
beatlemaniac9: young!Sam and young!Deanbeatlemaniac9 on November 15th, 2011 03:29 am (UTC)
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Before this post, I couldn't put into words why it all felt wrong!

THANK YOU!!!!!!!
Kiah: Slimy Luciferssockkiah on November 15th, 2011 04:26 am (UTC)
This is a lot of what I've been saying, only I like what you did there with the Becky analogy.

WHOO HOO AGREEMENT!

I really feel like this season has a lot more direction, but we are being directed into a void of nothing. Because there is no highway. These are just random plots, floating around.

And definitely Cas is the story. Or he should be. Even with everything that happened in season six, finding Castiel, having him be the endpoint. Even if they DIDN'T find him, and it was incredibly tragic... Sometimes you act like a shit, and there's nothing you can do to fix it.... These would be interesting stories, and we'd feel we were driving somewhere again.
ubikonoubikono on November 15th, 2011 05:02 am (UTC)
How much more can I adore you after writing this? Lot's more that's what!

You have so many interesting points. No matter how complicated the plot, its essence lies in simplistic solutions. Or rather it's closure, one that is satisfying and that all can agree with (as in, hey it all makes sense!)no matter if one is dissatisfied with the events that led to said closure/ending.

I agree, Cas's character paved the way for season 6 and all it's questionable events. And because I view Supernatural (more like the Dean and Sam show) as a Möbius strip (and here's where I stumble through my explanation). Like a Möbius strip, Sam and Dean's viewpoints (well they were raised with certain closed ideologies) travel along one certain way(continuous)but then there's that edge where it twists,lessens and seems to disappear only for it to return to its original state. That's how view their love and duty for each other. A continues loop, where all the forces can try to to enter ad ruin it but it will still stay there....(guess I made no sense with this ...oops)

Even though Cas's hasn't appeared in the season (aside from the first two episodes) this seasons does center around him. It centers around the by-product(s) of his mistake. I loathe to even write this but the Leviathans are the representation of his error. I mean, who was it who freed them(unknowingly). It was Cas and yeah, running back to season one is like admitting to having no clue. Though, I think that re-watching season one/two can give some clues to what's going on with some episodes. Since Supernatural (to me focuses on the subtle) so maybe Dean's not talking about his feelings but the things that are said to him or what he says and the reactions(this season) speak volumes and reflect the core of the series (which was shown in season one/two).
edgeofpandaedgeofpanda on November 15th, 2011 05:23 am (UTC)
I know not of what the writer's are thinking, but I hope to God they've found an arc with this season. I feel like 6 was a set up for one, and 7 IS the arcs.

I'm guessing some final involvements in the biblical sense; Leviathan and its involvement with Gabriel and Michael, or God, in ancient lore. It's very interesting and I hope this season sheds some limelight on that.

Otherwise, interesting piece you've written. Very analytical, and you made some very good focal points.
twisting_vine_x: Sam and Dean - Dead Or Alivetwisting_vine_x on November 15th, 2011 05:47 am (UTC)
Dean’s guilty about Amy. But he’s also hardened. But he also doesn’t trust anyone. But he’s also “the old Dean” again. But he’s also losing his identity because he doesn’t need to take care of Sam anymore. But he does, because Sam is crazy.

But Sam’s not crazy. Sam’s feeling good. Sam’s a grown man and doesn’t need Dean anymore. Except Sam’s wall is still down and he’s still seeing Offscreen Pellegrino. Except he is mad at Dean for lying to him. Except he gets it. Except he doesn’t.


A+++++++.
aliassmithaliassmith on November 15th, 2011 12:11 pm (UTC)
I wish I had something more eloquent to say, but all I really want to do right now is stand right here beside your post with a giant sign that says "THIS".
Zekkass: Hope/Heavenzekkass on November 15th, 2011 08:04 pm (UTC)
THIS. THIS.

This is basically everything - everything that outlines why I'm not happy with S6+S7.

I wish I had something coherent to add, but just. Yes. Thank you.
wickedvirtue on November 16th, 2011 04:19 am (UTC)
Yeah... THIS. Everything you said here just cleared up a lot of what was bugging me about this season (and last) for as much as I still sorta got some enjoyment out of it. This is the first show I've watched with enough depth and interaction to really watch plots build up and be worked through and having learned to see that, yeah, these post-apocalypse seasons had potential and it got squandered.

Thanks for articulating this!
Tangles: Sam - handsentangled_now on November 16th, 2011 08:59 am (UTC)
Yes, this was the mess of feelings I had at the end of season 6 summed up in words that make sense.
rowdy_missusrowdy_missus on November 16th, 2011 05:55 pm (UTC)
How do you always say exactly what I was thinking, even when I wasn't entirely sure I understood what it was I was thinking?!?! You're just too brilliant!! *bows down in worship of your meta*
tonicollinstonicollins on November 17th, 2011 02:13 am (UTC)
Amen, sister.

This season should've been about hunting things, saving people, and finding/saving Castiel because he's their friend/family and he worked damn hard to help them avert the apocalypse.

Why the showrunners are incapable of recognizing (or perhaps that should be acknowledging) that that character (and, of course, the actor) brought new life/blood/longevity to their show is so beyond me that I'm at a loss for words. And that's not an easy thing to accomplish.
Natascha: [supernatural] castielxanax_n_wine on November 20th, 2011 08:10 am (UTC)
I don't have any applaude gifs here, but I couldn't agree more with your post.

Because Castiel is the potential for the show after Season 5. He's the unexpected element that worked better than anyone thought he would, he's the life and heart that nobody thought would survive.

YES! The element that was set to be neutral and suddenly learns about the humans, about his father's creations that the other angels dislike so much and yet, he is taken by them, slowly and then, he finds himself among them. Castiel's "corruption" just show another face of the humans and honestly, I STILL feel angry about how the dealt with his exit, his death and how they still use his name to get some audience.

About Becky... I need to say, I felt sick with the episode, mad. I didn't finish watching THAT because i felt insulted.
caeli1701: pic#112365514miss_ciel on January 10th, 2012 06:00 am (UTC)
AMEN.